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Say what…?

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I thought when he leaned down it was a bit familiar and a kind of weird form of come on.

But then I realised that while he had caressed my ankle, he was really coveting my shoes!

I waited for a compliment on my lean dancers legs but the only one he uttered was about the shoes.

Is there a rule about asking a woman about her shoe size?  Like there is about asking her what she weighs?

Because while I was waiting for a compliment on my hard earned shapely calves, he is asking about my shoe size?

It gets worse, he then asked whether I thought the shoes would look good on him!

I was hoping that they looked good on me!!  Accentuating my dress and all that!!

(Body 130 words)




I was 46 years old when I begun this blog, female and married with a house full of cats (7). My past is littered with the impact of events that happened when I was a teen. Two loves of my life have been nursing and studying. I just completed my Master of Arts: Media Studies endorsement. My blog will be about the things I think about, that might be better served being written rather than squirreled away in my mind festering. It is the meanderings of my mind as I seek to define myself and my world.

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